037 – Below the surface

Today we are going to look at the importance of digging a little deeper with your writing by moving below the surface of a question or prompt. This is related to the idea of setting the limits of a questions (where you define keywords) or formulating a complex contention by stating it using the words ‘yes, but…’ or ‘no, but…’

When writing an expository piece it is equally important to deliver complexity in your response; this can be done by looking carefully at the question and trying to identify ambigious or undefined terms.

For example, for the prompt Social networking sites destroy our ability to communicate the words ‘ability to communicate’ are not clearly defined. Does this refer to our ability to hold a face-to-face conversation? Or does it refer to our ability to express complex ideas? Is this a reference to all forms of communication? Or is this only talking about the written form? Clearly, how YOU decide to interpret the words ‘ability to communicate’ will have a big impact on the direction your response takes.

The structure of your introduction should look something like this:

INTRODUCTION

  1. Background – define ‘conflict’ / what types of conflict are there?
  2. Hook: not necessarily a statistic, can be an interesting fact
  3. Present different responses to conflict
  4. Pose question that these different response naturally raise
Therefore, you would define the limits/focus of your response in area 1 or 2.
You will receive your prompt tomorrow. In readiness for looking at that prompt and defining the limits of your response, see if you can identify any poorly defined terms by looking for unresolved questions (as your saw in the above example):
  • Education provides everything young people need to develop into happy individuals
  • If you can’t beat them join them

031 – T.E.E.L. and Finding My Place In The World

Junior is stuck between two worlds, the rez and Rearden, do you agree?

In the first 15 minutes of this class, I would like you to write a T.E.E.L. paragraph for the above question. Please post this under you name on the student blog, when you get home.

Below is a reminder of the sentence starters that you can use for each section of your paragraph; however, before you begin writing you must think of one idea that proves the statement in the question is true or false.

T.E.E.L

Your TOPIC sentence should contain the main idea of your paragraph and the keywords in the question.

Beginning your EVIDENCE sentence:

  • This can be seen when…
  • One example of this is when…
  • Evidence of this is found when…
  • An example of this occurs at the moment when…

Beginning your EXPLANATION sentence:

  • This illustrates that…
  • This shows us…
  • This means…
  • This results in…

Beginning your LINK sentence:

  • Based on this it is clear that…
  • This supports the idea that…
  • Given the evidence presented, it appears as though…